Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel
that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
The importance of human activities on the Earth is something important and it can be denied at all. Human activities could have both positive and negative effect on the Earth. In my point of view, the Earth is being harmed by human activity for two crucial reasons.
First, I think some of human activities is going to ruin the balance in the nature. For instance, when human being cut the trees to make a prepare sheets for book, magazine,... they demolish the jungles and therefore, the trees which are the most important resource of oxygen are going to ruin. You can see in this case both human being and the Earth are going to lose something. In one hand we are going to lose one of our vital substance that could led us live and on the other hand the Earth is going to change because of loss. In this situation, earth weather could change totally and that could not be positive things for people that are living in that specific area.
Secondly, nowadays because of industrial activities human are producing a lot of detrimental gasses that could be the main reason that we made some damage in the Ozone layer. For example, in this century because of the development of technology, the number of the industrial companies are increasing. Therefore the pollution that these manufacturing centers are producing is rapidly growing and that can have a harmful effect on the Ozone layer. We should consider this issue really seriously because that damage annihilate Ozone layer forever and after that there is nothing that we can do for this problem. It would be so clear that in this case not only we affect this generation of people's life but also the next generations of people are going to suffer from this condition. So we could see that how much human activity could damage the Earth.
To sum up, although some people believe that human activity makes the Earth better place to live but in my opinion I think that human activities are the most important reasons that the Earth is going to be damage and if we do not stop the dangerous activities the Earth is going to damaged that is beyond repair.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... when human being cut the trees to make a prepare sheets for book, magazine,... they demo...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...make a prepare sheets for book, magazine,... they demolish the jungles and therefo...
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Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...he industrial companies are increasing. Therefore the pollution that these manufacturing ...
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Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: GOING_TO_VBD[1]
Message: 'Going to' requires the base form: 'damage'
Suggestion: damage
...gerous activities the Earth is going to damaged that is beyond repair.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65415549598 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41458979423 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447721179625 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0266304704 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322560492608 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122085157233 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101219720239 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253961587498 0.150856017488 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109991615441 0.0645574589148 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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