the main idea of both the passage and the lecture is about how can we prevent injuries happen to birds by flying through glass windows, the passage suggests some solutions for this problem while the professor in the lecture is totally disagreeing with the solutions.
both of the resources first discuss about one-way glasses which are transport in one direction, the passage claims that it makes bird to understand there is a mass and wont try to pass through it, while the lecturer contends that one way glasses reflect everything so birds in outside would see them as mirrors and we all know they don't have any perception of how mirror works so they would think the reflected objects like sky are real and they would want to fly through it.
secondly, the reading support the idea of painting lines or other designs on window glasses so birds would detect them and they won't see glasses like an empty space so they would avoid of flying through them and people would be able to see outside through holes created between lines,but as lecture said, the glasses are included big opening so birds would perceive them as holes and want to fly to them unless the holes are extremely small so they cant fly to them but it would make inside space to dark.
finally, the reading suggests that creation of an artificial magnetic field would help birds fly away from buildings but the lecture opposed against this and claims that birds use magnetic fields only for navigation in long-distance journies not for short distances like transportation in the cities, they use their eyes in these cases.
all in all, as the speaker claims none of these solutions won't have much effect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the main idea of both the passage and the l...
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Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'bird'.
Suggestion: bird
...t how can we prevent injuries happen to birds by flying through glass windows, the pa...
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Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...blem while the professor in the lecture is totally disagreeing with the solutions. both of the reso...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Both
...ally disagreeing with the solutions. both of the resources first discuss about on...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ee them as mirrors and we all know they dont have any perception of how mirror works...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
...and they would want to fly through it. secondly, the reading support the idea of painti...
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Line 4, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...side through holes created between lines,but as lecture said, the glasses are includ...
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Line 4, column 450, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s the holes are extremely small so they cant fly to them but it would make inside sp...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
... it would make inside space to dark. finally, the reading suggests that creation of ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...s, they use their eyes in these cases. all in all, as the speaker claims none of t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 30.3222958057 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76975945017 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29263969816 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53264604811 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 21.2450331126 273% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.787645798 49.2860985944 312% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 277.6 110.228320801 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.2 21.698381199 268% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42624211879 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.207370118341 0.0996497079465 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942707137681 0.0662205650399 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207370118341 0.162205337803 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942707137681 0.0443174109184 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.3589403974 225% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.53 53.8541721854 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.0289183223 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.42419426049 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 10.7273730684 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.498013245 240% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.2008830022 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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