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The reading argues that the building`s glasses cause millions of birds to get injury. Moreover, it provides three possible solutions to reduce the destructive effects of glasses which are utilized at the buildings. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and present some evidence to refute them all.
First, the reading claims that the one way glass which is transparent just in one side can reduce the bird’s` injury. Conversely, the lecturer casts doubt on this idea by stating that One-way glass acts as a mirror and it is harmful for the birds because if they see the picture of something in it they move toward it. For, instance, if they see the picture of a tree in the glass, they think it is a real tree and they may fly toward it.
Furthermore, the reading passage holds the idea that creating colorful lines on the windows can provide an opportunity to reduce this detrimental effect. In contrast, the professor underlines the fact that the birds might consider the unpainted sections as an open hole and again move toward it. He also argues that it could be a prominent solution if people decreases the unpainted are of the glass. But, this cause to reduce the amount of lights which can go inside the building, so, it is not a practical solution.
Finally, the reading asserts that an artificial magnetic field can assists birds to adjust their directions. on the contrary, the speaker dismisses this issue due to the fact that birds use magnetic field to navigate in the very long distances and they do not use it for the short distance an or path. For example, they utilized these method for finding their locations when the want to migrate from one place to other places. But, in the short distances such as when they are flying in the cities, they just use their eyes and the sun`s light for navigations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 68, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'assist'
Suggestion: assist
...s that an artificial magnetic field can assists birds to adjust their directions. on th...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...sists birds to adjust their directions. on the contrary, the speaker dismisses thi...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this method' or 'these methods'?
Suggestion: this method; these methods
... an or path. For example, they utilized these method for finding their locations when the wa...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226158038147 0.261695866417 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.136239782016 0.158904122519 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0653950953678 0.0723426182421 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0354223433243 0.0435111971325 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0653950953678 0.0277247811725 236% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119891008174 0.128828473217 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0136239782016 0.0370669169778 37% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.58833327517 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0272479564033 0.0208969081088 130% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.138964577657 0.128158765124 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190735694823 0.0158828679856 120% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0136239782016 0.0114777025283 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1854.0 1645.83664459 113% => OK
No of words: 321.0 271.125827815 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77570093458 6.08160592843 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.04852973271 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.317757009346 0.374372842146 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249221183801 0.287516216867 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16199376947 0.187439937562 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0996884735202 0.113142543107 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58833327517 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526479750779 0.539623497131 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.756050543 53.8517498576 102% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0529801325 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9285714286 21.7502111507 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4237821026 49.3711431718 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 132.220823453 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 21.7502111507 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 0.878197800319 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 47.8506898086 50.5018328374 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.51724137931 1.90840788429 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.608360220432 0.549887131256 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152608820059 0.142949733639 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101991147947 0.0787303798458 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.64680997509 0.631733273073 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0964972986319 0.139662658121 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.285890674567 0.266732575781 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618962083177 0.103435571967 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423551589348 0.414875509568 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0705268528291 0.0530846634433 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.434635462915 0.40443939384 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507541590608 0.0528353158467 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.2958057395 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.