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class="it">it class="is">is very understandable class="that">that nowadays parents face numerous pressure towards work and are left with a little amount of class="time">time to class="spend">spend with their kids and family. Once they class="have">have class="time">time, they wish to attribute their valuable class="hour">hour to their family. From class="my">my perspective, class="it">it class="is">is more crucial to class="do">do class="some">some physical activities with the class="children">children class="than">than class="schoolwork">schoolwork. But why class="is">is class="that">that?
Firstly, kids' academic performances are significant, making sure and supervising class="them">them class="that">that they are on the right track class="is">is the first step to educate the child. Keeping a good class="relationship">relationship with the teachers class="is">is an inevitable part. However, apart from class="that">that, there class="is">is no need to class="spend">spend hours on their class="schoolwork">schoolwork because class="children">children class="might">might already be sick of class="it">it, they class="have">have been fed class="up">up with class="schoolwork">schoolwork all day long in school.
Also, many students now take various extracurricular courses with uncountable class="stress">stress. Therefore, doing class="some">some physical exercise class="might">might greatly help you and your family to class="build">build class="up">up a healthy class="relationship">relationship. sports games such as basketball and football class="could">could greatly release the class="stress">stress and class="make">make themselves feel very relax and peaceful, class="it">it provides class="them">them with more opportunities to think class="about">about things other class="than">than studies. An enthusiastic girl Lucy from last year was passionate class="about">about sports. With a height of 167cm She always encourage class="us">us to challenge ourselves when class="we">we are drawn in our depression mood of losing one volleyball class="game">game. having her in the class class="is">is amazing, her spirit has spread over the class class="that">that always tells class="us">us not to give class="up">up at any class="time">time.
From class="my">my personal experience, class="my">my mom used to swim with me every Sunday afternoon, and class="we">we both enjoy class="that">that moment very much, so these type of mother-daughter class="time">time can always support me to get rid of all class="my">my troubles. In addition, having more physical activities class="could">could strengthen their bodies and class="build">build muscles. I class="have">have grown class="up">up 3 cm higher after swimming with class="my">my mom and class="could">could visibly see class="my">my muscles building class="up">up. Only with a strong body class="could">could a person achieve their excellence in academic levels and having class="some">some fun in sport class="could">could provide another topic to communicate with friends during breaks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Class
class='it'>it class='is'&...
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Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'classes'?
Suggestion: classes
class='it'>it class='is'>is very understandabl...
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Line 1, column 519, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'classes'?
Suggestion: classes
...perspective, class='it'>it class='is'>is more crucial to cl...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sports
...pos;relationship'>relationship. sports games such as basketball and football c...
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Line 5, column 894, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
...orts. With a height of 167cm She always encourage class='us'>us to challenge...
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Line 5, column 1076, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...leyball class='game'>game. having her in the class class='is'&g...
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Line 5, column 1094, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: class
...s;game'>game. having her in the class class='is'>is amazing, her spiri...
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Line 5, column 1167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: class
...amazing, her spirit has spread over the class class='that'>that always tells c...
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Line 5, column 1322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... at any class='time'>time. From class='my'>my personal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 30.3222958057 175% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3647.0 1373.03311258 266% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 359.0 270.72406181 133% => OK
Chars per words: 10.1587743733 5.08290768461 200% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 10.5882482792 2.5805825403 410% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 231.0 145.348785872 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643454038997 0.540411800872 119% => OK
syllable_count: 927.0 419.366225166 221% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.6 1.55342163355 167% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 3.25607064018 676% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 2.5761589404 427% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.496716031 49.2860985944 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 214.529411765 110.228320801 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06452816374 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 4.33554083885 231% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0130591783561 0.272083759551 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.011830639062 0.0996497079465 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00778747756006 0.0662205650399 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0125780775548 0.162205337803 8% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00256193475575 0.0443174109184 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 13.3589403974 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -34.44 53.8541721854 -64% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 5.55761589404 286% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.3 11.0289183223 211% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 41.65 12.2367328918 340% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 63.6247240618 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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