providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
I do agree with the idea that providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
The reasons are as follows.
First and foremost, with the rapid development of technology, the internet plays a more and more integral role in every individual’s life. It’s hard to imagine what life will be like without online shopping or instant communication. There is no doubt that all the service internet may provide are based on its access. So the importance of internet access for every citizen is self- evident, which worth abundance of investment from the government.
Secondly, free internet access can facilitate the equality among society. For instance, if every family have to spend 100 dollar on internet access, the cost may not seem high for the rich, but a big amount of money for the lower-incomers. This will eventually lead to that the poor is reluctant to pay the bill which causes them to be left behind by the internet era and lose a lot of possible opportunities to acquire knowledge, find job, as well as communicate with others. Finally, the gap between the rich and the poor will become larger. By and large, providing free internet access by government can effectively solve the potential problems.
Thirdly, the investment on internet access can be of benefit to a all citizens, by comparison to building road or public transportation, which can only benefit to specific part of people. Moreover, nowadays internet security is an important concern of all the governments throughout the world. So it is responsible for the government to always be in charge of internet service provided to its citizen to assure their private information safe.
In a word, the government is supposed to offer free internet access to its citizens since it is as vital as other public service program.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.003125 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86069641598 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8427339573 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.733333333 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.575569372537 0.236089414692 244% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184885103604 0.076458572812 242% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186529268482 0.0737576698707 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309669335003 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.228679001138 0.0645574589148 354% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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