TPO:52
The reading and the lecture are both about traits of colonization in an asteroid which tends them to figure out some advantages against disadvantages. The author of the reading believes that the asteroid would be the greatest replacement for human colonization. In contrast to that, the lecturer Hess doubt on claims made in the article. He thinks that It seems like real what we hear about it as it is not.
Initially, the author points out that lower gravity will be beneficial to us. It is also mentioned that aircraft could easily be landing and take off because of it. As a result, the cost of fuel will be decreased. Whereas the speaker challenges this point By saying that low gravity would be the cause of serious health issues, for instance, muscle and bone density loss.
After that, the originator contends about the finding of valuable material, causing a great profit for colony peoples. further, it is noted that the sponsor will get the chance to invest in colony people than they were at the beginning. Debates on this. He says the price depends on the availability of the product so the price of the metal comes from will drop rather than rise because of its abundance in. Besides, the cost of the metal would be high because of sponsoring the colony for This is high as well.
Finally, the author of the reading states that the path would be close to the earth where he forgets the fact according to the speaker that as they are not staying on the same side for always. As a result, the path distance will be determined to, For instance, the author mentioned that the astronauts who back from Mars to earth had to complete the more distance than the distance they covered to go from earth to the Mars.
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- Advertising influence people's behavior in a negative way? 70
- The widespread use of the internet has given people access to information on a level never experienced before. How does this increase in availability of information influence life in today's world? 81
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
...sing a great profit for colony peoples. further, it is noted that the sponsor will get ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...ey are not staying on the same side for always. As a result, the path distance will be...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, so, well, whereas, for instance, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1373.03311258 104% => OK
No of words: 307.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6319218241 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4147377536 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 145.348785872 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3174209828 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06452816374 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.2367328918 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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