Transient lunar phenomena TLP are relatively brief flashes of light that appear to come from the surface of the Moon Such flashes of light have been observed for centuries by both amateur and professional astronomers and several theories have been put for

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Transient lunar phenomena (TLP) are relatively brief flashes of light that appear to come from the surface of the Moon. Such flashes of light have been observed for centuries by both amateur and professional astronomers, and several theories have been put forward to explain them.

Transient Lunar Phenomena has been a topic of discussion among scientists. The passage argues that TLPs are not real and there are other reasons for them being observed. The lecturer, on the other hand, challenges the ideas presented in the passage by arguing that TLPs are real.

First of all, the passage argues that TLPs are the result of difficiencies in the telescope technologies. The passage adds that even small defects in the instruments can cause defectious results and TLPs are simply errors observed by the instruments. On the other hand, the lecturer argues that if the instruments were defectious, the results would not be similiar by different observants. Stating that, different observers have seen same TLPs at the same time.

Secondly, the text proposes the meteor theory for TLPs. This theory states that TLPs are simply rays of light that are produced as the result of meteors crashing at the surface of the moon. The lecturer opposes this idea by saying that flashes of light produced by the impacts will not last as long as TLPs last. Lights emitted as the result of impacts last for one second, yet TLPs last for more than 20 minutes. In addition to that, according to lecturer, TLPs are not being reported at the times of meteor showers.

Lastly, the thermoluminescence theory is also opposed by the lecturer. According to this theory, certain rocks emit light when sun shines at them. The lecturer, on the other hand, argues that those rocks cannot generate light because the surface of the moon is brighter than them. Although some rocks might shine but they will not shine as bright as the surface and the reason for those lights are TLPs.

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Average: 8.2 (2 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, in addition, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9014084507 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49814452072 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496478873239 0.540411800872 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6974587134 49.2860985944 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 21.698381199 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177163424836 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624053558322 0.0996497079465 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053150135011 0.0662205650399 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103219525477 0.162205337803 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408787061368 0.0443174109184 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.8541721854 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.0289183223 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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