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according to the reading passage, some reasons mentioned to approve that removing dead trees are beneficial for both environment and economy, while in the listening section, lecturer stated some competing theories that approves those methods are not so good for environment.
in the reading section,several ideas pointed out to indicate salvage logging(removing dead trees from forests) is beneficial to a damaged forest and to the economy. first, after a devastating fire if dead trees are not removed, they will take years to decompose,which is harmful to the environment. secondly, decaying wood is a suitable habitat for insects such as spruce bark beetle,which is detrimental for other trees and plants,so by removing rotting trees,this method helps minimize the danger of insect infestation. finally, trees have been damaged by natural disasters still can provide much wood for industries, besides, salvage logging create additional jobs for local residents.
however, in the lecture, lecturer argued that salvage logging actually results in serious longer damage, and he mentioned some controversial theories. first, dead trees
rapidly removement from forest does not necessarily good for environment,because it may cause shortage of the nutrients in the soil and may harm the soil. second, it is true that dead trees are habitat of some insects,but it does not mean that those insects are harmful for other trees. additionally, those trees are habitat not only for insects, but also for other animals such as birds. finally, economic benefits of salvage logging is s
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- TPO 31 independent writing skill 3
- one 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: According
according to the reading passage, some reasons me...
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...thods are not so good for environment. in the reading section,several ideas point...
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...for environment. in the reading section,several ideas pointed out to indicate salvage l...
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...to a damaged forest and to the economy. first, after a devastating fire if dead trees...
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...moved, they will take years to decompose,which is harmful to the environment. secondly...
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...se,which is harmful to the environment. secondly, decaying wood is a suitable habitat fo...
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...t for insects such as spruce bark beetle,which is detrimental for other trees and plan...
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...imize the danger of insect infestation. finally, trees have been damaged by natural dis...
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... mentioned some controversial theories. first, dead trees rapidly removement from ...
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...ents in the soil and may harm the soil. second, it is true that dead trees are habitat...
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Suggestion: Finally
...t also for other animals such as birds. finally, economic benefits of salvage logging ...
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... as birds. finally, economic benefits of salvage logging is s
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 243.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48971193416 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02013317975 2.5805825403 117% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58024691358 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3219512705 49.2860985944 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.4 110.228320801 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 21.698381199 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06452816374 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 4.19205298013 453% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.8541721854 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.2367328918 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.42419426049 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.7273730684 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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