Voynich manuscript origin

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Voynich manuscript origin

The reading passage explores several possible origins of Voynich manuscript, a script with complex secret codes, and several theories are given in support of these statements. as reasonable and substantiated as these points are, the professor casts doubt on them, implying that the people mentioned in the article are unlikely to be the real author of Voynich.
To begin with, the author of the article suggests that it was aa, a physician and botanist that composed this script with complex codes to document his genuine work since the handwriting in this script was similar to that in Augment’s book. Conversely, disputing the author’s point of view, he cites Augment’s book as proof that aa was an ordinary person, which didn’t correspond to the complex codes in the script. Therefore, the lecturer believes that aa had nothing to do with this script.
Second, even though the author proposes Elbert as the composer of the script and implies that Elbert served this script as a book of magical secrets to fraud a wealthy noble, the lecturer argues that it is a misconception. This is because people in the 16th century were quite naive, it wasn’t necessary for Elbert to create such complicated books and put so much effort to extract the money. Accordingly, the lecturer rules out the theory that Elbert was the original composer of this script.
Last but not least, the lecturer acutely identifies a weakness in the article that v created this fake script to sell it as a mysterious old book. He states that the ink on the script was at least 400 years old, which was unlikely for v to acquire. As a result, the lecturer indicates that the script probably was created centuries before obtained by v, dismissing that v was the author.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...e given in support of these statements. as reasonable and substantiated as these p...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, conversely, if, second, so, therefore, at least, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90572390572 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62443603923 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2213754547 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878560953561 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412751473628 0.0996497079465 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823756332872 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736176091162 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108360380352 0.0443174109184 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...e given in support of these statements. as reasonable and substantiated as these p...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, conversely, if, second, so, therefore, at least, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1373.03311258 106% => OK
No of words: 297.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90572390572 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62443603923 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2213754547 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 110.228320801 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 21.698381199 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0878560953561 0.272083759551 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412751473628 0.0996497079465 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823756332872 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736176091162 0.162205337803 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108360380352 0.0443174109184 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 63.6247240618 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.