Were dinosaurs Reptiles or Endotherms?
The reading passage and lecture are both about whether or not dinosaurs are endotherms. The article strongly postulates that these animals varied a lot of features from the once they considered as reptiles. On the other hand, the listening adamantly delineates that it is groundless because of three compelling reasons.
First and foremost, according to the author of the excerpt, dinosaurs' relics founded in Polar regions where had harsh climate and it was hard to sustain in this area for the reptiles. Nonetheless, the lecture offsets these points by declaring that the weather was much warmer than today in these regions. Furthermore, she asserts that these dinosaurs could have migrated to other places or hibernated like those reptiles during the cold climate.
The professor in the lecture further asserts that the position of dinosaurs' legs can not fully explain that they were endotherms due to fact that it was the structure to support these animals' great weight instead of adapted to running. these claims refute the writer's implications about their legs position helped them to adjust the physical activities because dinosaurs' legs duties were totally different from those of other reptiles such as crocodiles and some lizards.
The article lastly points out that the bone structure of those animals' demonstrates they actually had Haversian canals which provide some animals to grow instantly both in their size and length. The speaker in the listening counters these indications by insisting that they had also growth rings which indicate that they didn't grow rapidly in some period especially in the wintertime. it goes without saying that after this cold weather they were continuing grow as they used to, so it means that these characteristics clearly represent dinosaurs were endotherms.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ding passage and lecture are both about whether or not dinosaurs are endotherms. The article s...
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...this area for the reptiles. Nonetheless, the lecture offsets these points by decl...
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Suggestion: These
...t weight instead of adapted to running. these claims refute the writers implications ...
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Suggestion: didn't
...o growth rings which indicate that they didnt grow rapidly in some period especially ...
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...me period especially in the wintertime. it goes without saying that after this col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, if, lastly, nonetheless, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 22.412803532 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34265734266 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60857908173 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9819180818 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.909090909 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06452816374 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22706209969 0.272083759551 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776626941258 0.0996497079465 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794180290223 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129081865761 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083835083335 0.0443174109184 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.3589403974 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.