Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Artist is a profession where creativity is really needed. Some artists who have the great creativity can always produce masterpieces that can make a big money for them, while those who do not should compite with others so as to survive. People believe that government should take measurement to solve this unfair condition. While it can be argued, I personally believe that goverment should not turn up in this case as this condition can be a triger for most of artists to come up with a breathtaking creation.
Government tends to play role in this unfair situation such as establishing an organiz...
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Sentence: Some artists who have the great creativity can always produce masterpieces that can make a big money for them, while those who do not should compite with others so as to survive.
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