Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you regarding the plans to close the sports centre. It is inestimable since it is the only place where we can relax and forget about our problems. In fact, I go there with my friend to exercise at the gym. My family as well go to the swimming pool at the sports centre and we have just renewed our membership for a year.
The sports centre, therefore, plays an important role in our society as it help us to improve our health. Other citizens either go to meet friends or go for a family gathering. Not only it enhances our health but also it helps us have a great time since it was opened. It is an influential factor in the vast majority of us.
By closing the sports centre, a counterproductive would emerge. One of the adverse consequence is disappointing many people because they cannot engage in sports activities. Moreover, children will go to play on the streets because they cannot go to the sports centre. I appreciate if you could rethink and reconsider this decision.
I look forward to hearing a good news from you.
Yours faithfully,
Paula
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
... decision. I look forward to hearing a good news from you. Yours faithfully, Paula ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.605 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6832396464 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9851802348 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7857142857 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103546108967 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398406970331 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416447233108 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490629272477 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227250256572 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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