Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter regarding an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming classes at our society sports complex. At the moment, I am a beginner at swimming and interested in developing my swimming skills. I have prior knowledge of swimming equipment and know some basics of strokes using both arms and legs.
The main reason I want to improve at swimming is to stay fit, and I believe it is one of the best exercises to stay in shape. As we know, swimming is the best sport to burn calories and people reduce a lot of weight from this useful exercise. Apart from that, swimming is a life-saving skill which people should learn and use whenever required.
Before joining the classes, I would request you provide some details regarding membership charges and the monthly cost for weekday classes. For long-term benefits, I am particularly interested in a yearly membership. Furthermore, please share the timing for the classes, I work during the day, and evening classes would be suitable for me.
I look forward from you the details as soon as possible.
Kind Regards
Peter Parker
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84656084656 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61379945555 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 189.0 16.3608247423 1155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 916.0 76.5299724578 1197% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 189.0 16.8248392259 1123% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 48.0 4.34317383033 1105% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660810181801 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660810181801 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441588423271 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214435254896 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 95.9 8.37731958763 1145% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -111.9 70.7449484536 -158% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 75.8 7.45979381443 1016% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.35 7.59969072165 215% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 8.62886597938 637% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 77.6 8.54432989691 908% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 8.15463917526 674% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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