Write a letter to your friend who is working in multinational company. In your letter
- Tell him/her that there is a job vacancy in their company.
- Say how you found out about the job.
- Ask for help with your job application.
- Explain why you are interested in this job.
Dear Sarah,
I am sorry I have not written for so long. My work and studying keeps me so busy, that I never have a minute to myself. I hope you and your family are well.
I was not lucky in the past few months; I lost my job because of bad economic situation. Last day, I saw an advertisement that has shown there is a job vacancy for a programmer in your company. As you, working in a multinational company is one of my dreams as a programmer.
I am a programmer with a five years experience. I believe your company is a best place for me and I can gain new experiences. Besides, your company develops amazing mobile application with Android that is one of my favorite platforms.
I need your favor, can you tell me a little more about your company policy? Can you mind help me to complete my resume and tell me about application process?
With the best wishes,
Mari.
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My work and studying keeps me so busy, that I never have a minute to myself.
My work and studying keep me so busy that I never have a minute for myself.
As you, working...
As you know, working...
Sentence: I believe your company is a best place for me and I can gain new experiences.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 649 1000
No. of Different Words: 93 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.108 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.613 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 39 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 16 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.6 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.451 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.668 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.237 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4