You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.
You should write at least 250 words.
I do not agree with the statement that businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. I state my opinion on the following points.
First of all, every company must have its moral code. It means that a company should treat its clients properly and respect their rights. Of cause a company may lose a part of its profit but security of its clients must be on the first place. Otherwise, clients will switch to another company and never be back. For instance, a few years ago "Jonson&Jonson" produced a new type of painkillers. Unfortunately, this product was not tested properly. As a resul...
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flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.6 21.0
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 312 350
No. of Characters: 1453 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.203 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.657 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.418 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.829 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.471 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5