some people want their country to host international sports events. While others, however, believe that it brings more problems than benefits. Discuss and give your opinion.
The role of sports to make life healthy, wealthy and exotic is exceptional. Presently, some proportions of people aspire their native country to host international sports events to get social and economical benefts. By contrast, others claim that it brings more cons than pros. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my opinion.
There are multifarious advantages of games at international level. First and foremost, the organization of sports competitions boosts economy of a country. For example, thousands of tourists, who bring hard currency with them, visit to host nation to see...
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thousands of tourists visit to host nation to see matches and support their home team who bring hard currency with them
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Sentence: Presently, some proportions of people aspire their native country to host international sports events to get social and economical benefts.
Error: benefts Suggestion: benefits
Sentence: Eventually, crime activities like terrorist bombards, bulgary, stealing, kidnaping might occure on account of crowd gathering.
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Sentence: From my notion, ''every sword has two edges''. Along with benefits, drawbacks of such events can not be ignored. a country needs to make sure surplus funds simultaneously deliberate management of tournaments? before looking farward to set up them.
Error: farward Suggestion: forward
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