Artificial Intelligence- treat or threat

Essay topics:

Artificial Intelligence- treat or threat

Artificial intelligence(AI) is one of the biggest talking point for technological advancement. Artificial Initelligence is basically a electronic storage which can behave according to one's demand. It is consider as the most important thing for many different sectors.

AI is growing exponentially day by day. There are many technological companies' CEO who are in support of AI. One pf the biggest admirer of AI is Facbook's owner Mark Zuckerberg. He states many advantages of AI to the world. By using AI as soldier, we can reduce death tolls in war. AI also used in day to day life in one's house. For example, Google has launched 'Google Things' which can be used to control different electronic devices by your voice at home, like, A.C., Refrigerater, T.V., Fan, LED bulbs,etc. This shows how AI helps to improve somone's living standerds. However, there are many people who are against this thechlogy advances. One of the most common thereat they have, is what if these AI powered machines dominate human and take over control in their own hands. Many belives if this kind of thechnology will go to some evil minded person, then he can use it to destroy lives of people.

At the end, we can say that AI is useful for many sectors. But we should make one proper structure by which we can control all kind of AI machines. By this, we can reduce impact of consequences of Artificial intelligence.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Artificial Initelligence is basically a electronic storage which can behave acc...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
... behave according to ones demand. It is consider as the most important thing for many di...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...onsider as the most important thing for many different sectors. AI is growing exponentiall...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...war. AI also used in day to day life in ones house. For example, Google has launched...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...A.C., Refrigerater, T.V., Fan, LED bulbs,etc. This shows how AI helps to improve som...
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Line 3, column 696, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this AI' or 'these ais'?
Suggestion: this AI; these ais
...st common thereat they have, is what if these AI powered machines dominate human and tak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82916666667 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84323942303 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4247582181 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1764705882 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1176470588 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0365825070491 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0161639368297 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350176917103 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444065870796 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392972345755 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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