Family Tradition
As a rule, family traditions are important in the life of each family and each family member. The maintenance of family traditions and conveying family history from one member to another is exactly what makes the family the solid unit, whose members feel close relations and unity. In this regard, I will tell you about the experience of my own family.
About this subject, I can refer to the experience of my family and my personal experience. My family has its own traditions which we observe and which are extremely important for us. For instance, if a family member is in trouble, we always support each other. The entire family unites its forces to help the family member in trouble. This mutual support is very important for our family members, but we do not consider that mutual support as something unusual. In contract, we take the mutual support of family members for granted. Even when we are apart and have not seen each other for years, we will definitely help each other just because we are the family.
Each family member learns to respect our family history since early childhood. We learn to respect the values of our family and its traditions. In the course of education of each individual family member, he or she learns basic family values, while the family history helps him or her to understand how those traditions and values were shaped and why he or she should respect them. For instance, as I learned the history of my family in the genealogy, I accustomed to take financial difficulties easy as provisional problems because I am certain that my family will help me as well as I will help my family and altogether we will stumble through the hardest time.
In fact, our family history and values make us feel being members of our unique but small community. Such as achievements of my ancestors make me proud that I am a member of my family and I want to make my children and grandchildren be proud of me. The family history, traditions and family values, all of these things help people to feel being members of the small community – their family.
In conclusion, the family tradition is the cornerstone of a family that can not be replaced. The family is a small but highly influential community, which people can never ignore.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 24.0651302605 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7297979798 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56354303306 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434343434343 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1207549905 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5789473684 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36842105263 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491613407324 0.244688304435 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217464297145 0.084324248473 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159498900468 0.0667982634062 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374423363718 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944163278904 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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