Mother

Essay topics:

Mother

A mother is the first, foremost and best friend of everyone’s life as no one can be true and real like her. She is the one and only who always stands with us in our all good and bad times. She always cares and loves us more than we deserve and others in her life. She gives us first priority of her life and gives us glimpse of hope in our bad times. The day we born, it is our mother who becomes really happy. She knows our all the reasons of happiness and sadness and try to make us happy every time.

There is a special bond exists between mother and kids which can never be end. A mother never less her love and care to her kids and always give equal love and care to her every kid but we all kids together can never give her a little love and care like her in her old age. Even after she never understands us wrong and forgive us like a small child. She understands our each and every activity, we can never fool her.

She never wants us to get hurt by someone and teaches us to behave well with others. In order to pay attention and pay thankfulness to the mothers, May 13th has been declared as a Mother’s Day to celebrate every year. No one pay even a single role in our life as a mother. We too always take care of our mother all through the life.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...than we deserve and others in her life. She gives us first priority of her life and...
^^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...se of hope in our bad times. The day we born, it is our mother who becomes really ha...
^^^^
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'be' and 'end'.
Suggestion: be never end
...xists between mother and kids which can never be end. A mother never less her love and care ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'kid'
Suggestion: kid
...ve and care to her every kid but we all kids together can never give her a little lo...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05158730159 5.12529762239 79% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09771303443 2.80592935109 75% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484126984127 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8560756813 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9285714286 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64285714286 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192300103131 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976279260321 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105104956554 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165197055408 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756109155151 0.056905535591 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 12.4159519038 48% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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