Mother

Essay topics:

Mother

<p style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-bottom: 1.6em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.7em; font-family: &quot;Open Sans&quot;, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; word-break: break-word; overflow-wrap: break-word; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;">Nothing in this world can compare with the true love and care of our mother. She is the one and only woman of our life who loves and cares us so much without any personal intention of her. A child is everything for a mother. She always encourages us to do any hard things in the life whenever we become helpless. She is the good listener of us and listen everything bad or good what we say. She never restricts and limits us to any limitation. She makes us able to differentiate between good or bad.</p><p style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-bottom: 1.6em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.7em; font-family: &quot;Open Sans&quot;, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; word-break: break-word; overflow-wrap: break-word; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;">True love is another name of a mother which only a mother can have. From the time we come in her womb, takes birth and throughout her life in this world, she give us tired less care and love. Nothing is precious than a mother which one can be blessed by the God thus we should always thankful to the God. She is the embodiment of true love, care and sacrifices. She is the one who turns a house into a sweet home by giving birth to us.</p><p style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-bottom: 1.6em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.7em; font-family: &quot;Open Sans&quot;, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; word-break: break-word; overflow-wrap: break-word; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;">She is the one who starts our schooling first time at home and becomes a first and lovely teacher of our life. She teaches us behaviour lessons and true philosophies of the life. She loves and cares us from the existence of our life in this world means from her womb till she alive. She gives birth to us after bearing lots of pain and struggles but in turn she always gives us love. There is no love in this world which is so lasting, strong, unselfish, pure and devoted. She is the one who brings lights in our life by removing all the darkness.</p><p style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-bottom: 1.6em; padding: 0px; border: 0px; font-variant-numeric: inherit; font-variant-east-asian: inherit; font-stretch: inherit; font-size: 14px; line-height: 1.7em; font-family: &quot;Open Sans&quot;, sans-serif; vertical-align: baseline; word-break: break-word; overflow-wrap: break-word; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); white-space: normal;">Every night she tells us about mythological tales, stories about the God and Goddess and other historical stories of king and queen. She always becomes very anxious about our health, education, future and our safety from other strangers. She always leads us towards right direction in the life and most importantly she scatters true happiness in our life. She makes us strong human being mentally, physically, socially and intellectually from a small and incapable child. She always takes side of us and prays to God for our wellness and bright future all through the life even after we make her sad sometimes. But there is lots of sadness behind her always happy face which we need to understand and take care of her.</p>

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 776, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ten everything bad or good what we say. She never restricts and limits us to any li...
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Line 1, column 829, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tricts and limits us to any limitation. She makes us able to differentiate between ...
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Line 1, column 1430, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
... throughout her life in this world, she give us tired less care and love. Nothing is...
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Line 1, column 2206, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a first and lovely teacher of our life. She teaches us behaviour lessons and true p...
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Line 1, column 2274, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sons and true philosophies of the life. She loves and cares us from the existence o...
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Line 1, column 2378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rld means from her womb till she alive. She gives birth to us after bearing lots of...
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Line 1, column 3268, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...re and our safety from other strangers. She always leads us towards right direction...
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Line 1, column 3386, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he scatters true happiness in our life. She makes us strong human being mentally, p...
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Line 1, column 3502, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ually from a small and incapable child. She always takes side of us and prays to Go...
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Line 1, column 3645, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...en after we make her sad sometimes. But there is lots of sadness behind her always happy face...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3207.0 1615.20841683 199% => OK
No of words: 545.0 315.596192385 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88440366972 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.25941319799 2.80592935109 152% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.411009174312 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 887.4 506.74238477 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.959501112 49.4020404114 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.714285714 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9523809524 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0619602431832 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0353404969956 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892864376808 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619602431832 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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