Organized tours to remote community and other countries are increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for local people and the local environment?
Write an essay to an education reader to discuss the effects of tourism. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.
It is undeniable that tourism is becoming one of the interests of many people around the world especially organized tours to remote communities and other countries are increasing these days. In my viewpoint, I think that it brings both positive and negative development for local people and the environment.
On the one hand, tours to remote communities and other countries help local people advance in terms of the economy. In this way, local citizens can make a lot of money and develop multiple attractive tourists projects. In addition, local culture may spread strongly and become one of special part attraction for tourists. Besides, the local landscape of destinations also are recommended to many others and they become a wonderful place for people would like to come to. The more people know these destinations, the more chances tours help both tourism companies and local people and the local environment. Indeed, the effects on tourism are extremely big and they affect a great number of aspects, ranging from culture, society, economy to transport.
On the other hand, this type of tourism has negative effects. Many people going to famous places became a serious concern to the local environment. These days, tourists still have the habit is that throwing trash in public places, in particular, attractive destinations. Thus, this status conduces environmental pollution such as plastics pollution, water pollution and so on. For example, water contains a great amount of trash which is emitted by people, so water sources cannot use normally as before. People even destroy the landscape around to take a photo or shoot a video. Moreover, local residents also are influenced when these places have too many people go there. It makes traffic congestion, noise pollution, and they feel annoyed and angry because of it.
To sum up, for the above-mentioned reasons, I am firmly convictions that organized tours to remote communities and other countries have both benefits and drawbacks for local people and the local environment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, may, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in particular, such as, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28134556575 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78662918414 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538226299694 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0032262691 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.588235294 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302989978379 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101135014708 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847478842867 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229751685418 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835343776683 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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