What your opinion what quality do you think a person has to have the most to achieve success in his or her own life?
To achieve success in our work and life is not one thing easily, we have suffered from many failures and challenges. In my viewpoint, I think that a person has such qualities including persisition, dare, and positive attitude which they can get their success in multiple fields.
To begin with, there is no success that can obtain promptly without persistion. We always need to understand that we must learn more and more including things that we know and new things. We enhance our knowledge and practice it's in our life and work. We must study persistent manner, as time goes on, we have for ourselves intellectual resources. When it comes to persistion, we should pursue our goals strongly and we should not give up easily; therefore, success can able to come with us nearly.
Furthermore, out of the persistion, success also needs to dare ourselves before the difficulties. When having a challenge in our life, we had better accept and willing to encounter them. A scared attitude will lead to inferiority, afterward, we do not dare anything. If we encounter new things, we will receive many interesting and useful lessons which we do not know before.
In addition, a positive attitude or view is also one of the reasons leading to the success of a large number of people. Failure is the inevitable barrier if we would like to achieve success. At this time, we should keep our positive attitude and healthy spirit. We are not frightened and confused about these things because failures always occur. It is worthwhile for us to remain our spirit comfortably and refresh ourselves mind. Learning from the failures and standing up from mistakes is an important thing.
In conclusion, it is my firm conviction, having success in our life needs these qualities concerning persistence, dare ourselves, and a positive attitude. Improving and developing qualities will helps for our jobs and lives in the future.
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...Improving and developing qualities will helps for our jobs and lives in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.003125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78404880244 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4028206629 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2631578947 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101961923451 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390408066186 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346796986247 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771622395244 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408594086308 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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