What your opinion what quality do you think a person has to have the most to achieve success in his or her own life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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What your opinion, what quality do you think a person has to have the most to achieve success in his or her own life? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
As everyone knows, a persons success is estimated in many aspects li...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...r success. Finally, when it comes to ones success, it would appear that most peop...
^^^^
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'laugh'.
Suggestion: has always laugh
...le often think about a happy life. Life always has laugh, warmness, and calm is a blissful life....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'laughed'.
Suggestion: laughed
...ink about a happy life. Life always has laugh, warmness, and calm is a blissful life....
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69069069069 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4171357529 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8690822577 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226802238309 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907852825079 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555621276536 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145208446369 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415421460467 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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