Technology has spread by leaps and bounds in recent time. A group of folks deem that online transaction and credit cards would take place of paper money in upcoming era. I am agree with this statement and will discuss my views about this in upcoming paragraphs.
To initiate with, nowadays everyone is connected with internet and technical equipments through which they can do all works with perfection and conveniently, as well as it will remove corruption and black money from nations. If people do their payments by credit cards and Paytm ,there will be no chances of fraud and people would be worry less about thefts because they deposited their all money in banks and will do all their transaction through online banking. To illustrate-in India demonization was set up by Indian government regarding to the purpose of find out all the illegal money people have.
Furthermore people would become more interested about online system of payments due to some schemes which are offered by government on using credit cards and Paytm while doing any type of transaction. In addition to this, making paper and coin currency costs too much, whereas if electronic methods of payment become popular among people and everyone would use these methods in their daily life consequently cost which is wasting in making currency could saved and this money could be used on country's development.
To recapitulate, I would like to say that the way of doing payments by online methods is the best way of transaction which would aware people more about technology and it's benefits for them. I think that online ways of money transaction definitely make a country cashless and provide safety to users.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ce of paper money in upcoming era. I am agree with this statement and will discuss my...
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...their payments by credit cards and Paytm ,there will be no chances of fraud and pe...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...out all the illegal money people have. Furthermore people would become more interested abo...
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Line 3, column 455, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'save'
Suggestion: save
...ich is wasting in making currency could saved and this money could be used on country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00711743772 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60846081645 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569395017794 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0890138436 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.7 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333232491016 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11834558664 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731497051528 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186411125289 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344736535422 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.33 Out of 6
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