There is an increasing trend of old people living longer in many countries around the world. Do you think this has a positive or a negative effect on the population as a whole?
Nowadays, with the development of medical, the new medicine and vaccine, we can against so many dangerous disease. In the most nation of the world, our health care service is better and better and we don’t worries about food. So, in the many nations, the human can live longer and longer.
In development nations, recently, with busy work and the change opinion, the number of the newborn babies is decreased. When the number of older people increased and newborn babies is decreased, the nations are become older nations and have many problems.
The first problem is over load of medical and health care service because The older person has more healthy problem and need more care. When the older people don’t have child, they must live alone or live in nursing home and they really want health care. In fact, Japan that is an older nation employed too much foreigners for caring older people and their nursing homes may over load.
The second problem is pension. The older person usually have pension. When we have more and more pensioner we want too much money and we may don’t enough money to pay for pensioner.
With problems when the number of older people is decreased, we have some good point. Most of older person after retired still can work or make produce. With experiences and skills work if we have good production method they are really good worker.
Older people is a problem or not a problem depend on the method that we caring them and use them on work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...an that is an older nation employed too much foreigners for caring older people and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, really, second, so, still, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79150579151 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20912861801 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471042471042 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1606192142 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7333333333 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812107298502 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341851569039 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471912799781 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451873437602 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352405095607 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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