advantages or disadvantages of credit card. Do you agree or disagree

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advantages or disadvantages of credit card. Do you agree or disagree

The importance of advantages or disadvantages of credit card is which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recant years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

There are myriad of reasons which will further explain of this arguments but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that now days many new technology is increasing time by time modern things such as credit card machine every city in available because there are so many type of advantages credit card. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that in these days 80% people depend on credit card machine because they are every time give money from credit card. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

However, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming one is that all people have not more money any people poor with this they are not use to credit card but they want to use credit card but they are poor so that the credits card is not good in poor person life. Besides, 2009 in 70% people use to credit card but now 40% people use to credit card because people are not rich. Hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.

According to the arguments mentioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of credit card because we can every time take money with help of the credit card machine are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 10.5418719212 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 318.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88050314465 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45337238 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8072253961 50.4703680194 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.333333333 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219037758998 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783818816757 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788714020404 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141709657811 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326225864042 0.0609392437508 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 53.1260098522 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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