Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers be made illegal?
It is argued that bad treatment against senior staff at work place because of their age must be made illegal. This essay agrees to bring the age discrimination under the umbrella of law. This essay first explains the reasons for this unfair treatment and then examines how these can be avoided.
The respect towards the senior workers at office is highly unlikely conspicuous. This age discrimination starts with employment offering itself as most companies are not ready to take seniors as they are come with a high cost. Unfortunately, these seniors are neither treated fairly for being identified as pink slip receivers. The more senior one becomes at work place the more expensive they could be for the organization and hence the company is very reluctant to promote them. All these actions can be tagged with the same name called age discrimination. For instance, a study conducted by the University of Melbourne found that at least 75% of staff of age 50-60 years are facing this discrimination at their work place.
This behavior can only be reduced by making it as illegal. The law must ensure to provide enough freedom for the older workers to lodge complaint against the managers followed by providing enough evidence to support their argument. The company must be punished as per the law with heavy penalties if proven guilty. For example, LinkedIn website published the results of a recent poll participated by senior workers of major corporate companies across the globe and shockingly 98% of them are looking for the government action to bring a law suit.
In conclusion, the government must make the age discrimination at work place as illegal and thus provide assurance to older workers.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: LAWSUIT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lawsuit'?
Suggestion: lawsuit
...ng for the government action to bring a law suit. In conclusion, the government must ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, so, then, thus, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05300353357 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74793092601 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5168940125 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.25397266985 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216085075725 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835254769358 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507251355362 0.071462118173 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142659557147 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662211713898 0.0609392437508 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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