Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of person's age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. should discrimination againts older workers be made illegal?
The important age discrimination which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. It can be said that in the workplace most often decisions about being employed in the first place winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. This essay will eleborate how discrimination against older workers be made illegal and this will lead to a conclusion.
At the outset , there are numerous reasons why age discrimination should be illegal but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that if companies have elder employees then they will give training to the fresher employees so they easily adopt companies instructions and they have idea about how this conpany works and how they achieve their goals to become successful.
Nevertheless, some masses adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that if age discrimination should become legal is also significant for the discrimination as there are in numerable reasons for that but for the most salient one is that if in the work areas older workers being retied in the specific age and companies will give chance to the yougsters so they have abilities to apply new ideas, Moreover they are more active as well as have capabilities to work for more hours.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 31.9359605911 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 1207.87684729 85% => OK
No of words: 202.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07920792079 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88788455643 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569306930693 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.5024630542 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.940248148 50.4703680194 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.2 104.977214359 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 20.9669160288 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.4 7.25397266985 254% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296079348301 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184180605007 0.0925447433944 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145387059478 0.071462118173 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215894507986 0.151781067708 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141547191431 0.0609392437508 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 12.6369458128 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 53.1260098522 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.9458128079 173% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.3980295567 173% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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