Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age.In the work place ,these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against older workers me made illegal ?
Decisions that are made on a person based on age is known as age discrimination.This type of discrimination is generally found in workplaces by exploiting on through appraisal or dismissal.Companies should pass a strict law on discrimination among elder workers.
Employee should be treated fair enough based on the contribution made by each to enhance the growth of organization.People who work as per metrics and innovate new ideas could be recognized and appreciated thorough promotions.Meanwhile the other workers and minimal contributors can be motivated to perform better instead for being dismissed. Workers should be encouraged to adapt to new technologies to improve their skills. Thus would be helpful in
company performance and employee work balance.
Companies should pass a law on against discrimination on elder workers. Older have made the performance of the company better in early ages, thus are the core resources of the Initial growth. Elder people should also be treated equally as younger ones. Appraisals should be fair enough for every employee. Moreover elder people experience would be helpful in difficult times to make certain decisions. Thus elder people should be treated fairly.
In general age discrimination is not a good practice that can be followed in an organization. Companies should perform a detailed and fair analysis for promotions and appraisals. Every one should be treated fair and good to maintain a good balance among workers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 6.10837438424 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48034934498 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4538475846 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532751091703 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.0 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 84.5305168801 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5384615385 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263563111193 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101864689127 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538520716609 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146823836479 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615326953453 0.0609392437508 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.94827586207 216% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.