agree or disagree: actions speak louder than words

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agree or disagree: actions speak louder than words

Nowadays, actions have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the world, which leads to a moot question "do they speak louder than words?" Although some people think words are louder than actions, I tend to believe that the opposite is correct.
From a political point of view, words are indeed bound up tightly with elections, which mean they might lead to both presidential elections and political needs. For example, a group of profound politicians, working at a prestigious university, conducted a longitudinal study to establish the relationship between the breaking promises, candidates as well as reactions. Therefore, this evidence presented thus far support the contention that breaking words is correlated negatively with not only empty words but also policies.
In psychological terms, actions and words are attributable to family background, in that it would lead to expressing feelings, emotions, and lying. A well-known example of such attributions is parents' kindness which is cause for concern since it had been mistaken to take effective actions for granted. Had it provided children with comfort in advance, it might have had the opportunity to raise offsprings. Thus, performing actions could play a significant role in spurring somebody into action.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree with actions could speak louder than words. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.

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Average: 8.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Nowadays, actions have become a long-running dispute among the public all around the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 237.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56540084388 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01953498971 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.994545184 50.4703680194 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.9 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320161724976 0.242375264174 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116252400378 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138207555524 0.071462118173 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182936500335 0.151781067708 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921057699362 0.0609392437508 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.5310837438 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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