Attending a live performance is more enjoyable than watching television. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
These days, it has become a growing trend to see people attending and enojing live performance such concert or sporting events more than watching television. As such there are both merits and demerits to this trend, although I am of the opinion that the former outdo the latter. I lay down reasons supporting my viewpoints with relevant examples.
There are myriads of arguments in favour of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that when people got to the live events they get chance to meet like minded people and have experience of their life time. People not only realized positive impacts of attending live performance such as watching their idol playing the sports or music up close can inspire them to achieve their own goals, but also measured the gravity of its relevance. Needless to say, all these upsides stand live performance enthusiast in a good stead as far as live performance is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls which can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of live events. The primary ones lies in the fact that it cost lot of money to attend these performances in the term of tickets, travelling, snacks and many more. Another overt aspect of this argument is that sometime fight ,may occur because of some violent fans. Hence, it is apparent from the aforementioned discussion why many are concerned about live events.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of attending live events are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56751659859 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63137254902 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9353702555 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.25 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310670464704 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968391758152 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111410586193 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174725137948 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650764660405 0.0609392437508 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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