Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use daily product but other country have to be transported for a long distance. to what extent do the advantages outweigh this advantage?
`The importance of the global economy, many goods including, which has always been debatable has now upsurge a lots of arguments in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of imitating celebrities has sparked controversy over the potential of this trends is an integral part of society in the recent years. It can be agreed that the upside of imitating celebrates are instruments indeed, however it has some various drawbacks as well. This essay will be elaborate on both assertions and provide a well-weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why the global economy, many goods including is unreservedly salient. But the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that that advantage. Therefore, it is a vital time to appreciate both the significance of the we use daily product by other country have to be transported for a long distance for the overall amelioration of society.
However, it has some people who choose to think differently and hold an opposing viewpoint, which can certainly overwhelm substantial influence on the global economic, many goods including? Hence, it is apparent that the downside of the cannot be overlooked.
The above presented dissertation illustrates both perspectives about the impact of the global economy, many goods including. While it is evident it has some various benefits. Although its deleterious effects cannot be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: upsurged
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
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Suggestion: the; we
... to appreciate both the significance of the we use daily product by other country have...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e global economy, many goods including. While it is evident it has some various benef...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s evident it has some various benefits. Although its deleterious effects cannot be ignor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38157894737 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07313140907 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622807017544 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1648717651 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262955126596 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767180937719 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799026313437 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153010748139 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967617480907 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.