It town and cities, the large shopping malls should replace the small shops. Do you agree or disagree?
The importance of In town and cities large shopping malls should replace the small shops which has always been debatable, has now upsurge a lot of arguments in favor and against it, thus it has become even more controversial. The substantial influence of in towns and cities the large shopping malls should replace the small shops has sparked the controversy over the potential of this trend in an integral part of the society in recent years. It can be agreed that upside of in town and cities the large shopping malls should replace the small shops are instrumental indeed, however it has some various drawbacks as well. This essay will be elaborate agree assertion and will provide to a well-weighted conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why in town and cities the large shopping malls should replace the small shops in unreservedly salient, but the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that in shopping malls we can buy various goods under one roof and second is at shopping malls accept the plastic money we can buy our favorite brand from one place. In shopping malls owner provide good facility to consumer like air conditioner and more services. Shopping malls provide a some offer in festival session, one new year and session off sale so we can buy the branded product at cheap price and it provide product on fix price so that why its reduce the time of bargaining.
According to me I conclude that shopping malls provide various benefit to customer like gifts, discount and time saving process and specially in malls provide good parking facility to customer so that why cities and town’s people like do shopping from the shopping mall.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87062937063 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50775119959 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.054478854 50.4703680194 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.125 104.977214359 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.75 20.9669160288 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.25397266985 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375617308403 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192965151257 0.0925447433944 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116002090589 0.071462118173 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265874803342 0.151781067708 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987596418178 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.94827586207 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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