Birth rate is low and many countries are facing with the ageing population. What are the main underlying causes and effects of this global issue?
The importance of birth rate, which frequently generated a great deal of heated debate, has recently become even more controversial. Some proponents believe that the low birth rate in some countries is attributed to globalization and this phenomenon causes the aging population which has a negative impact on the development of countries' economy. This essay will elaborate on the causes and effects of the problem.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons why the birth rate has been reduced in various nations but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that, in the era of globalization, many people in present days spend their time on working and they do not have enough time for family and raising children. According to a new study, the proportion of the unmarried population in Japan has increased in recent years although its quality of life is much better than in the past. Obviously, the globalization creates more opportunities but it makes people busier and be possessed in their works. Thus, they do not have time for cultivating a family.
Moving on to consider the effects, some scholars suggest that the aging population has become a critical issue that poses governments all over the world. One of the effects is that there will be not enough labors in the very near future. Moreover, the increase of old population requires social services such as health insurance and clinical workers. Therefore, this will slow down economic development in the nations and it is difficult to resolve the issue if there is no long term solution right now.
In conclusion, taking these points into consideration, from my personal perspective, I am inclined to believe that governments should tackle the birth rate issue as soon as possible because it is predicted to be a disaster in future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ecause it is predicted to be a disaster in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02006688963 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82606122962 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 139.433497537 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.2128359964 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.9669160288 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230261209996 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721338249374 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773581781232 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129280863149 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979198171524 0.0609392437508 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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