A business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion.
The acute importance of the profitable business, no matter big or small, which has always been debatable, upsurged ample spatial arguments resulting in further controversial fervor and sparked numerous contentions. However, I undisputedly and unambiguously affirm that profitable business plays an important role in our lives. Nevertheless, this essay will colossally elaborate on the business of making profits, no matter big or small, and provide a well-weighed conclusion derived from the bonafide conformation.
Pragmatically, being imperative in nature, the significance of the profitable business is to eradicate the beleaguered predicaments, such as unemployment, from society to let it thrive unprecedentedly. The evolution of modern technology has adapted advanced perceptions and concepts while delivering maximum profits to entrepreneurs. The whole network of the business, including every single tax-paying employee, holds an equal opportunity, to get the maximum benefit from the service provided to the particular business. This, at all levels of society, generates jobs and thus eradicate unemployment.
Subsequently, in pledging the allegiance to society, the profitable business, big or small, influence society enormously in multifarious ways. The profitable business is preponderantly propagating initiatives enthusiastically undertaken by the government to promote both large scale or small scale businesses to boost up the economy of the nation. This would explore myriads of opportunities, offering negligible impediments, for the people who wish to set-up their own business. This, in turn, helps every individual to play his role in the overall economy of the country. The government then becomes sufficiently capable to spend money on all infrastructure.
Therefore, in conclusion, I strongly believe that business whether it is big or small, making any sort of profit, helps to boost the economy of the country and thus maximize the profit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rceptions and concepts while delivering a maximize profit to the entrepreneurs. The whole ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1207.87684729 142% => OK
No of words: 287.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95818815331 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45488612661 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 139.433497537 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616724738676 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 379.143842365 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4701978685 50.4703680194 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.538461538 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226677649886 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759113990686 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765590129928 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155359517287 0.151781067708 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748715824691 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
automated_readability_index: 17.7 12.6369458128 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 53.1260098522 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.34 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.94827586207 176% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.5123152709 171% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.