Cashless society is becoming a reality. More and more people are using credit cards for payment, and less
people use cash. How realistic do you think it is and what do you see in its potential benefits or problems?
Now people are living in the tech savvy era and many changes have taken place. people are using credit cards for payment as cash. In the following paragraphs I will discuss the benifits and problems of using credit cards.
To begin with there are many advantages of using credit cards for payment. The first and foremost due to credit cards people can purchase anything from any place without doing to market with the help of internet. people can pay the amount of any thing from home or from any place. Moreover, with the help of credit cards people cannot take a large amount of money on hand and they can save a lot of money on credit cards. In the credit card money is totally safe. In addition the size of credit card is very small so it is easily handle and people can take it in their pocket easily.
In contrast, every coin has a two side, credit cards have some problem also. The people who did not know about the technology they can not use the credit cards. Sometime people can share their passwords with other people that time they get many problem. Secondly, people can lost their credit cards and they face problems.
To conclude, credit cards have more have more benifits than problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... era and many changes have taken place. people are using credit cards for payment as c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ng to market with the help of internet. people can pay the amount of any thing from ho...
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Line 2, column 243, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... internet. people can pay the amount of any thing from home or from any place. Moreover, ...
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Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...e credit card money is totally safe. In addition the size of credit card is very small s...
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Line 2, column 531, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'handled'.
Suggestion: handled
...edit card is very small so it is easily handle and people can take it in their pocket ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e can take it in their pocket easily. In contrast, every coin has a two side, cr...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...wo side, credit cards have some problem also. The people who did not know about the ...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
...ds with other people that time they get many problem. Secondly, people can lost their credit...
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Line 4, column 27, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'have more'.
Suggestion: have more
...e problems. To conclude, credit cards have more have more benifits than problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 1207.87684729 82% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55299539171 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.99551409252 2.71678728327 73% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 139.433497537 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520737327189 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 379.143842365 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3513848058 50.4703680194 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.5714285714 104.977214359 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251294272247 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116564312672 0.0925447433944 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882693230041 0.071462118173 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176608696068 0.151781067708 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372855271837 0.0609392437508 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 12.6369458128 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 53.1260098522 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.9458128079 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.5310837438 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 8.32886699507 78% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 55.0591133005 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.