Cashless society is becoming a reality. More and more people are using credit cards for payment, and less people use cash. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Various cashless payment methods are increasingly entering our areas of lives. While few individuals suggested that they might beget benefits to our daily lives, there are some negative implications such means of payment are accompanied by. This essay will discuss why cashless society is detrimental to the public.
There are various advantages behind the implementation of cashless society. For example, cashes such as banknotes and coins are dirty and the application of cashless society might mitigate this problem. Many children were in fact infected by contagious diseases last year in Hong Kong through the use of banknotes. While using cashless payment through mobile phone might be an easy option to sustain public health standard, the government might also want to consider other options.
Another school of thought is that such seismic shift of becoming cashless alters the citizen's behaviour negatively. By applying cashless ways of payment, customers are bewildered by the ensuing convenience and this results in imprudent purchases. It is well-known that some people who cannot pay their credit card bills still keep buying because of inadequacy of the sense of trading. Therefore, it is conclusively clear that cashless society should be disadvantageous to teenagers.
In my opinion, transforming to cashless society brings a lot of drawbacks because this poses a threat to our youngsters.
In conclusion, this essay highlighted the reason why the emergence of cashless society is harmful to us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 233.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5364806867 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89442900126 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635193133047 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6571242317 50.4703680194 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.2307692308 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27152134384 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867876181861 0.0925447433944 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029844924123 0.071462118173 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129163590536 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449296761728 0.0609392437508 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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