In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. Cashless society seems to be a reality, and how realistic do you think? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
The controversial topic with respect to cashless society never fails to attract public attention.There has been a heated debate on whether there are more credit cards are used instead of cash.From my perspective, I tend to be an advocate regarding this issue.
It is evidently reasonable for me to believe that replacing cash with credit cards is quite realistic at present due to the fact that advanced technology development.That is because most shops and restaurants provide EFTPOS devices, so it is not very necessary for customers carrying notes and coins in their wallet at any time.For example, people prefer to use cards to purchase expensive goods when trade involves a large number.As a result, available technology allows people to prefer to use cards for shopping.
Based on the above situation, there are various advantages to promoting credit cards.Firstly, using credit cards saves customers time. This is because there is no need to change in the checkout process, which means using credit cards rather than cash can increase shopping efficiency.In addition, it can regulate the market economy behaviour to avoid some crimes.That is to say that it is beneficial to facilitate the supervision of tax evasion and money laundering activities.
Given all the points discussed above, I can conclude that replacing cash with credit cards is realistic now, and it benefits our time saving and the economic market order.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, regarding, so, for example, in addition, as a result, with respect to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34649122807 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91791623411 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 379.143842365 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.5024630542 219% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.102020558 50.4703680194 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.8 104.977214359 232% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6 20.9669160288 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.2 7.25397266985 278% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172007146204 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097526657245 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523361514002 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101168181141 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483572227086 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 12.6369458128 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 53.1260098522 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.9458128079 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.94827586207 292% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.3980295567 192% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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