Certain kinds of music promote learning in life. Agree or disagree.
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on the typical day reveals the effect of certain kind of music on people has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
Let us take a look at the agree statement. The first and foremost benefit of certain kind of music is the concentration is increased of people’s. People’s memory are also improves. When a person listens a song at that time he put his all concentration in song this process increase concentration of the people’s. After that another benefit is music increase the learning ability of the people’s. When people listen the songs then they learn so many things from the songs. Furthermore the other thing which the people learn from the music is that peoples aware about the good or bad music.
Apart from that there are some disagree statements let us take a look on it. Firstly now in the songs the singers promote the illegal things like the drugs and the weapons. After listen these types of songs youth do the illegal works in their life.
In conclusion we can say that there are lots of things we learn from the music. But there are some drawbacks of music. If there drawbacks should remove of music then there are only the good things which we learn from music.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ey learn so many things from the songs. Furthermore the other thing which the people learn ...
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... things like the drugs and the weapons. After listen these types of songs youth do th...
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... But there are some drawbacks of music. If there drawbacks should remove of music ...
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Suggestion:
... good things which we learn from music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, then, apart from, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74193548387 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63771325536 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512096774194 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9087279456 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242716408678 0.242375264174 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798944681489 0.0925447433944 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668027018864 0.071462118173 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126660018851 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472786505193 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 12.6369458128 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.5310837438 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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