With the rise in the use of internet facilities results in generation of several problems in our society. Discuss the problems and solutions.
Surely there has been no time in history where the live of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals internet facilities has been one of the prominent topics in the contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain several problems in our society. Regarding this, I would say, it is happening mainly due to rise in use of internet and can be solved by implementing the solutions discussed in this essay.
To commence with, internet is the important part of every person’s life, but the hight amount of usage of internet cause many problems. Firstly, most people use internet in every work place. They do their whole work with the help of internet while sitting at home, which is very harmful for their health and faces many health issues. For instance, obesity, back bone problem, muscles shrink and so on. Moreover, internet has physical and psychological effects on human’s life. Furthermore, rise in the use of internet by children, destroy their future. Because, they spend a lot of time on internet to playing video games, listening to music, watching movies etcetera, where they never concentrate on their studies.
On the other side, every problem have many solutions. First, government should have to provide cyber security all over the world. Second, parents should look after their child’s activity. For example, parents should not give their children mobile phones at a younger age. Last but not the least, data limit should be set according to child’s age limit.
To conclude, internet is most important for our life, if we use it properly.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 268.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15298507463 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69253845104 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630597014925 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7784883598 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2352941176 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262979037403 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077319389109 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691379702527 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144732924771 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638511573155 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 12.6369458128 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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