Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their career. Others believe that a women’s role should be limited to talking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and ways?
Surely there has been no time in history where the lives of people have changed more dramatically. A quick reflection on typical day reveals women given equal chances to work and excel in their career has been one of the prominent topics in contemporary discussion. People have always been intrigued to analyze and explain the women’s should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Regarding this I would say my viewpoint in upcoming paragraph
To begin with, women deserve the same rights as man from the beginning of time women have played a powerful role in shaping of this world. Men and women have equal but different mission in life. Each person has their own freedom. Women adopt the lifestyle of men is not only contrary of their nature and divinely given task, but always a lack of self respect of their own dignity and worth. Men and women should be treated with the same respect and be given the same chances .some people believe that men can do things that women can’t and going on.
At the outset, it invariable shows that the women’s should equal rights and chances as compare to men’s.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 1207.87684729 78% => OK
No of words: 197.0 242.827586207 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78172588832 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4363049794 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 379.143842365 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8768722702 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423030070002 0.242375264174 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161464051894 0.0925447433944 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110755676277 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271655765207 0.151781067708 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415585598277 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 55.0591133005 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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