Chevening is looking for individuals with strong networking skills, who will engage with the Chevening community and influence and lead others in their chosen profession. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your networking skills, and outline how you hope to use these skills in the future.
Strong networking ability is the backbone in any successful business, it always opens the closed doors and makes your duties easier. I can consider it a special definition of cooperation to facilitate life challenges through sharing the personal experiences with each other .
I believe that any skill or any ability can grow up by training, reading and working hard , so I tried to enrich and built up my ability in this issue since my graduation from faculty . I recognized that volunteer work is the shortest way to gain and improve this skill, thus I decided to participate with St. Paul Organisation for medical services in their charitable work throughout Africa helping the poor societies there . On 2016, I participated the small medical team travelled to Ghana as an ophthalmology specialist, going to rural areas to discover problems there and trying to apply practical intelligent solutions. Also, in 2017 I joined the team travelled to Mauritius for 10 days where we worked together with other non-governmental organisation trying to gain an access through the poor provinces and territories helping people there not only by supplying them with medical therapies but also with medical knowledge . Being a member in St Paul Organisation, I have made strong connections with other medical specialities and also other nationalities-St. Paul is a global organisation- the things I'm very proud of.
I would devote my life to expand my network connections by applying to Chevening scholarship thus, I could pursue some volunteer and charitable work in Egypt through a research centre in a more professional way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23552123552 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13709550823 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637065637066 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.1784561608 50.4703680194 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 104.977214359 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.9669160288 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170971949364 0.242375264174 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704072059155 0.0925447433944 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347951676726 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109069588353 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160436482847 0.0609392437508 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.