The claim that animals have "rights" has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. are zoo helping or hunting our animals? should zoo,s be banned ? Do you agree or Disagree ?
One of the popular subject since the 1970 is Animal Rights. Zoological parks have been set up to protect animals and helps to safeguard them from various endangering factors.
Zoo is set up as a place where animals can be protected and preserved from extinction. They provide various facilities for animals like Food, Water etc. The main purpose of Zoo is to prevent animals as safe environment, for example Animals are protected from hunters to eliminate killing for skin, flesh etc. In other cases could serve as place for breeding, for example Zoo could help in raising young cubs with ideal situations and protecting from other predators. Thus, Zoo plays a vital role in helping animals and also could promote tourism and income to government.
On seeing the negative aspects of Zoo, animals are being subjected to various kinds researches . Many animals undergo modern techniques to obtain some profit, for examples a zoo in Thailand, tigers are being used in research with other variety of species to obtain a new organism. In other cases animals are being kept away from their natural habitat, for example animals raised in zoo when taken back to wild would not adapt to natural living habits. Which in other ways could be said Zoo's act as a profitable place.
Zoo's must be organized in a well manner and must be made a better place for animals to raise in their natural habitats. Government should help to improve and make Zoo a better place for animals animals and should be maintained well to attract more tourists thus, helping the region a better value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89513108614 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41531496498 2.71678728327 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0565886071 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 7.25397266985 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294920815395 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134137067885 0.0925447433944 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476342059879 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20425488754 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164060332976 0.0609392437508 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 12.6369458128 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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