The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
The important effect of animals, Which was always debatable, but has now become more controversial. The sustainable influence of animals has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on recent year in my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational and this essay will further elaborate my reason. for forming the positive and negative affect of this trend and thus will lead to be logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons calm that animals are captured in zoo but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact they are well protected from predators. As an illustration lot of people complain them and its save for this place. Furthermore they are kept with particular species to enhance the breeding.
Nevertheless according to some people there remain some drawbacks which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of animals, but the most alarming one is rooted in the fact everyone need freedom and it depend on other. For instance it bringing them into a safe environment. In addition people visiting zoos get to know the animal from close and encourage research .
From what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the impact of animals is prominent although they are well protected and care off in the zoo should be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, look, nevertheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09216589862 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.718341812 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617511520737 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3461305936 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151741106047 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543176241901 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704546508925 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100560600528 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634186372704 0.0609392437508 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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