The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
Since many years, animal rights have been argued on a number of grounds. Whether a zoo facilitates better living for animals or are another means of torturing them is highly debated. Some opine that zoos must be banned. We will discuss the pros and cons of both in this essay.
Animals kept in the zoo get the required aid on timely basis. To elaborate, medical emergencies are catered to them as and when required. This has saved the lives of many animals. Additionally, some bird sanctuaries are housed with birds that would have otherwise become extinct in the outside environment. As such, these zoos have contributed to some extent towards the protection and preservation of some animals.
However, one cannot deny the fact that there are some atrocities inflicted on some animals in order to entertain the visitors. To exemplify, some zoos allow pictures with animals and snakes for some extra money. These animals by nature are ferocious and venomous, but they are trained extensively and inhumanly to help these institutes earn more money.
To conclude, every species should be allowed to live and breathe in their natural habitat. This is true even for animals. They are conditioned to adapt their bodies and react in their own environment. As such, zoos and forest officials should collectively contribute towards the conservation of wildlife. Those that need shelter for further preservation can be kept in the zoo and those that are meant to thrive in their natural conditions should not be forced in the zoos.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05533596838 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63601102228 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2827965745 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2352941176 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8823529412 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.17647058824 7.25397266985 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264482299394 0.242375264174 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806901473092 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700168131293 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162905790961 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602874511771 0.0609392437508 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.5 Out of 90
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