The claim that animals have rights has been subjected as a matter of debate since the 1970’s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned?
It is irrefutable to say that animal right activists have always fought for the right of those who cannot speak and are subjected as a source of entertainment keeping in a confined lication . Some do not believe in this notion; however, I strictly believe animals should not be kept in zoo. This essay will highlights some of the consequences of having animals in zoo.
To begin with, wild animals from very early in human civilization are subjected to human as a source of entertainment and are the grim reality whether we believe ot or not. Uprooting animals from their wild life and keeping them permanently in habitable location which is confined with in walls is a crime. Needless to say because of animal right activists animals are not used in circus;futhermore, there is also haw that prohibit keeping exotic animals as pets.
Moreover, zoos are relocating animals from their natural habitat which w limits their freedom of space and food. For example, known as the king of jungle, tiger are kept in a small room in zoos and are fed with the food with supervision which is not the way to deal with tigers because they are free living and roam around acres of land in jungle. In spite of these allegations for zoos, in my opinion zoos need to define themselves again and make a place for having ill wild animals caring them nurturing them and leaving them back to the wildlife.
To recapitulate, promoting wild life reserve, national parks which can have flora and fauna for the animals to survive in its own natural environment needs to be promoted, instead of confining them in zoos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78700361011 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66074251815 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9403718825 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.6 104.977214359 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.7 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265577561353 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12025292056 0.0925447433944 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576976618142 0.071462118173 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167534485171 0.151781067708 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780297054757 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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