company's top level authorities should get their employees in decision making?

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company's top level authorities should get their employees in decision making?

The important of employees in decision-making , which has always debatable, but now has only become more controversial. The employees play a vital role in achieving companies goals and objectives. The goodwill and the company depend on its employees. So in my opinion company should involves its employees decision-making. In this highly competitive environment, ,management and employees should work together companies success and profit. The essay will explore how it can be overcome in the upcoming paragraph before a particular conclusion.
To begin with, An employee’s feedback is very important for company because a person work in particular area and we can say a person. Who experience something can give better feedback regarding them. The employees of the company are aware every aspects of the company. They will always give the genuine review regarding anything. So their suggestion should be taken into consideration by top level management as they know the true picture of the company.
To the other hand, the involvement of the employees give positive vibes to the employees. Hence they will get motivated for work. If their suggestion will be taken into consideration they will do their work more dedication and Concentration.
To sum up, as aforementioned, I think for company success and profitable, high level-management should work together

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Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mportant of employees in decision-making , which has always debatable, but now has...
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Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hieving companies goals and objectives. The goodwill and the company depend on its ...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'involve'
Suggestion: involve
...loyees. So in my opinion company should involves its employees decision-making. In this ...
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Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... In this highly competitive environment, ,management and employees should work tog...
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Line 1, column 411, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ment and employees should work together companies success and profit. The essay will expl...
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Line 2, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Who” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...articular area and we can say a person. Who experience something can give better fe...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...s give positive vibes to the employees. Hence they will get motivated for work. If th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, regarding, so, i think, in particular, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48341232227 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31373547928 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2115654417 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1333333333 104.977214359 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 20.9669160288 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309065069844 0.242375264174 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975608257698 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682921792009 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17163986199 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622718146228 0.0609392437508 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 53.1260098522 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.91 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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