Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of product producers to avoid extra packaging of products?
The over packed products would be stopped by the customers or manufactures. According to my point, the manufactuers have to concentrate on the extra packed products not the consumers.
The products should be packed as per the safety procedures and it could reach the people without any damage or scratch. The extra fitting covers would be considered and it has to removed to save the environment from the pollution. The manufacturer are having the full responsibility to monitor and applied some paramount steps to vanish these issues. They are concentrated on the decorative of the products not the valuable reason to uncover the package. The clients never see this problem as a priority steps to remove it.
The main concern of the manufacturer is the frangile but they are focussing more on the attraction of the materials for the marketing and sold out. Even though, they have some essential measures to control the extra ordinary ideas to reduce the over package with efficient manner. Some of the products need to be over packaged due to the shipping and flight cargo facilities. As per the company, they could do over package in some circumstances without liability.
In conclusion, the origin of the product with over package has to apply penalty and it could be full responsibility of them to withdrawn some unwanted things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ave the environment from the pollution. The manufacturer are having the full respon...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...the over package with efficient manner. Some of the products need to be over packaged due t...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: TO_WITHDRAWN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'withdraw'?
Suggestion: withdraw
...could be full responsibility of them to withdrawn some unwanted things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 222.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04954954955 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8671763863 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 139.433497537 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545045045045 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 355.5 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0622918324 50.4703680194 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4166666667 104.977214359 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.9669160288 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 7.25397266985 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294577856749 0.242375264174 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112114865479 0.0925447433944 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792900707789 0.071462118173 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198747412508 0.151781067708 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525765731185 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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