Do you think consumers should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of product producers to avoid extra packaging of products?
The extra covered materials shall be avoided by producer or the customer. According to my knowledge, it is manufacture's responsibility to recover these things.
Firstly, it would suggest lot of contradiction between the buyers and marketers. In this issue, some sort of people blames that the producer could avoid the unwanted covers over the products and at that same time, they should very cautious about the environmental issues and clean infrastructure in their country. But these fellows want to attract the clients by show-off the decorated package. They intended that buyers are mostly absorb the splendid outer surface of the things not the inside core.
Secondly, some part of people are very rational and thinks about the quality outsource which could be safely packed not fabulous as open. They give preference to the quality of the product. Their main concern is about the safety of the object and it should be the responsible of the company to distribute and deliver the undamaged products.
In conclusion, the clean environment is very essential for everyone to take part in the global warming issues to be rectified. The people who considered that the offspring would be health enough in forth coming futures. They could avoid wastage which would be created by the over package materials and safe the ecological system from pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 433, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'absorbed'.
Suggestion: absorbed
...e. They intended that buyers are mostly absorb the splendid outer surface of the thing...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17808219178 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69959188296 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.889586691 50.4703680194 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210800736819 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669768163506 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735165627922 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120457687588 0.151781067708 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331243788793 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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