Do you think consumers should avoid purchase of over packaged products or is it the responsibility of produces to avoid extra packaging of products.
Give your views with any relevant examples of your own experience.
In modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on whether sellers should own the responsibility of reducing over packaging or should the buyers reject such products. This essay agrees that the product owners must be accountable for their actions on producing heavily packed items. This essay will firstly discuss on reasons for over packaging and then explains how it can be reduced.
The primary reason for superfluous packaging is to reduce the inconvenience to customers and increase brand marketing. For instance, a kids meal in McDonald's outlet serves a bag of chips, a fully covered burger, a can of drink with a lid and straw and finally a toy in a plastic bag. This kind of packaging clearly explains how McDonald products come with over packing. All these products will have their brand name printed on packaging and customers can easily carry their products with them. By doing so, the product owners are gaining exceptional customer satisfaction along with a power marketing.
Government should step up to reduce this heaving packaging by imposing penalties on product owners. Companies must be made aware that no such ostentatious packaging is required for any product if it is quality enough to meet customer needs. Being government is paramount, it can easily enforce organizations to reduce over packaging by bringing them under the lawsuit if found guilty. For example, a research conducted by the University of Melbourne last year found that the companies are using extra packaging as there are no regulations defined.
In conclusion, product owners and government must work hand-in-hand fashion to reduce superfluous brand packaging for their products.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'kids'' or 'kid's'?
Suggestion: kids'; kid's
...crease brand marketing. For instance, a kids meal in McDonalds outlet serves a bag o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29739776952 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82764526211 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1365165883 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230444607761 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916261013889 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420623436802 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144458285958 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302032190632 0.0609392437508 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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